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Asterix and Zombelix by achaziel Asterix and Zombelix :iconachaziel:achaziel 5 1 #JeSuisCharlie by achaziel #JeSuisCharlie :iconachaziel:achaziel 14 1 They see me lurkin' ... by achaziel They see me lurkin' ... :iconachaziel:achaziel 38 4 Yin/Yang by achaziel Yin/Yang :iconachaziel:achaziel 23 7 Ganondorf by achaziel Ganondorf :iconachaziel:achaziel 4 2 191 - Stage Fright by achaziel 191 - Stage Fright :iconachaziel:achaziel 1 5 190 - Actual Conversations #8 by achaziel 190 - Actual Conversations #8 :iconachaziel:achaziel 3 4 Avatar by achaziel Avatar :iconachaziel:achaziel 1 0 189 - Artistic Anatomy by achaziel 189 - Artistic Anatomy :iconachaziel:achaziel 3 0 188 - Achilles' Heel by achaziel 188 - Achilles' Heel :iconachaziel:achaziel 3 0 187 - Plot Twist Man by achaziel 187 - Plot Twist Man :iconachaziel:achaziel 5 0 186 - Kids these days by achaziel 186 - Kids these days :iconachaziel:achaziel 2 2 185 - A Painful Realization by achaziel 185 - A Painful Realization :iconachaziel:achaziel 2 0 184 - Actual Conversations 7 by achaziel 184 - Actual Conversations 7 :iconachaziel:achaziel 2 0 183 - Some People by achaziel 183 - Some People :iconachaziel:achaziel 3 2 182 - Potatostarter by achaziel 182 - Potatostarter :iconachaziel:achaziel 2 0

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:icongendgi:
Gendgi Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2015
Thank you for the watch! :)
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achaziel Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
NP mate
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MoonGoneDark Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014
Hey how have you been?

I listened to the kind advise you gave me and it helped me improve this fan art scene completely:
Future Sonic by SuperMoonImagination  

Now the elbows look a lot nicer where they bend, and ditching the bumb maps for the suit and fur gives it more of a cartoon look. I tried a little motion effect too at the shoes, but I've never done this before so I'm sure it will improve for future work.

Thanks for the help! :)
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achaziel Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Theeeeere ya go, this looks a lot better, doesn't it?

I'm gonna guess that you did the motion blur in an image editing program after rendering it, right? There's actually a way to do motion blur in blender, it's rather easy (once you know where it is); here's a short tutorial if you want to look into it a little further: www.youtube.com/watch?v=rdAO91…

Also a little depth of field *could* help to bring the character a little more into focus (if that's what you want, that's entirely a matter of taste), which is also rather easy to do once you know where to look for: www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cf7NBw…

Just a few further suggestions, but those are really minor complaints. I'm getting a much better feeling overall by now, overall a massive improvement. Great job!
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MoonGoneDark Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014
Wow I had no idea Blender had a motion blur feature. That looks really simple to use, too!

For the depth of field I made the background a little out of focus (but not too much) in comparison to the foreground because I wanted things like the text on the alert sign to be readable. I see what you mean about that, and if not for the sign it would have helped to make the background less clear because it would mean I would not have to be worried about detail quality so much. (I will be taking advantage of this later)

Thanks again! It's been a great learning experience and I'm sure it will continue to be! :D
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achaziel Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, I figured you'd want that sign to be eligible, it was more of a suggestion anyway. As I said, DOF is entirely a matter of taste (I for instance tend to turn it off in FPS games, DOF tends to distract a lot when you have to be precise, but I love DOF in photos and videos. I know, I'm weird.), so there's no reason to use it if you don't want to, that's perfectly fine. However, you might want to keep that function in the back of your head, it might come in handy in later renders :)

Anyway, I'm glad I could be helpful in some way, shape or form.

And, as always, keep doing what you love and never stop improving! Cheers
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Lozzar1999 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014
I love your work ^^
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achaziel Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Du kannst mit mir auch gern deutsch schreiben, wir sind ja beide aus Österreich ;)

Vielen Dank fürs Feedback!
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Lozzar1999 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
I'm afraid I used Google translate for your comment because I'm from Australia not Austria simple mistake completely understandable :) 
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achaziel Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, whoops ^^ I should really stop browsing Deviantart when I'm extremely tired...
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